My Community Essay
A definition of community involves a group of people who all share a common trait. It may be their race, religion, interests, or anything of the sort. For me, my community is journalism. It is my strongest central community because in journalism everyone must contribute a piece of themselves in order to create a greater whole. If someone slacks off, or doesn't do their job, then the entire paper could be a wreck. Especially for the people with the most impacting jobs, such as the section editors and editors in-chief.
Journalism works like a family. There is someone to provide income for the family, someone to run the house in order to make living smooth, and then the children, who basically need to be instructed what to do in order to accomplish something.
The "children" of the family are the reporters of the newspaper. They are given the assignments, and then they come back with an article. The family members that provide the income are the section editors. They take the articles from the "children" and work it into the paper. Editors in-chief are like the behind-the-scenes family members. At first it may seem like they're not doing a substantial amount to contribute, but they are truly running the show. Without all of the members of the family, everything would be complete and utter chaos, and not everything would be done properly.
My collage relates to my community because it displays a part of how everyone contributed to make this paper. We couldn't have done it alone, but when we focus and put our minds together, we can come up with something brilliant. I think my fellow classmates realized this from the comments that they left about my collage. One fellow student commented, "I definitely get an easily understood sense that your community is journalism."
Another wrote, "Your community is clear, and shows how you are connected."
I believe that these quotes, along with my collage, display my definition of community in a way that shows I am connected.

2 Comments:
Title = snooze-ville...totally boring!
need a hook...don't just jump into the topic.
I like how you've structured this...very interesting/ creative to use an extended analogy AND proivde a sense of your experience in that analogy (evben though I'd like to see specific examples of these things). Good job!
Rough incorporation of the collage...how can you fit it in more seamlessly?
Essay overall seems a little short, but more detailed, specific experiences with the transitions requested will make this a solid example of this type of writing.
Great job!! The first thing that stuck out to me was a few words in your thesis, "contribute a piece of themselves." I love how you worded that, it really shows how much effort and time has to be put into journalism.
We were talking in class today about introductions and how they are are supposed to be catchy, i think (somehow) you could do something a little more catchy for the reader. Keep your clothes on in the beginning, remember? haha.
Overall, i really like the essay. Especially the part where you compared your jounralism team to a family. That says alot about how much you guys work together to create something. A job well done! :)
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